Writing

Descriptive Writing Sample Hamish Key 3/2/12
==It was the most outrageous day of my life. I could see the theme park pop into my eyes as we came closer and closer on Eastbound Highway #12. We rolled into the parking lot with ease, and I was the first to jump out of my seat. I was ready to have some fun. The man at the ticket booth was swiping my mums credit card. I could feel my hand reaching and grasping that golden ticket to freedom. Finally, we made it. The breeze as I entered the gates felt like victory. I could hear the roar of the roller coaster as it passed above me, the smell of salty hot chips being crunched between peoples mouths. It was another D-Day. Many after many roller coasters shot into our view, the park must have stretched 10 miles long. This is going to be a good day...........no it was going to be a fabulous day!==